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What's Wrong
With Fran's Before Resume? |
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I met Fran
while teaching a Workforce Training class at a One-Stop Employment
Security workshop.
She was upset
because she had applied for over 20 customer service positions
but hadn't landed even one interview. I could see that she was
worried her entire job search was going to be like this. Fran
rewrote her resume and about a week later she ran into me and
shared her new success with me. She had faxed two resumes on
a Friday and on Monday had already gotten calls for interviews
on both resumes. Within a week she had taken her response rate
from 0% to 100%.
Fran has extensive
customer service experience as a directory operator and business
owner. Before creating her new resume, Fran had applied for a
Customer Service Representative position and had all the skills
listed in a 2-page job description for the position. Yet, she
didn't land an interview for that job either. Now, lets take
a quick look at Fran's before resume.
When you glance
at Fran's resume where does your eye go first, second, then third?
What headings and job titles grab your attention? How well does
this information match your image of a corporate Customer Service
Representative? |
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Is Fran's
After Resume
Better? |
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Now take a quick
glance at Fran's after resume. Where does your eye go first,
second, then third?
Which resume
sells Fran's top skills at a glance?
Now, read the objective statement in Fran's before resume. Compare
it to the objective statement in this resume. Which is better?
Which sells Fran the best?
Now, read the
job titles Fran listed in her before resume. Compare her job
titles to the skill headings in this resume. Which is better
to market Fran for a Customer Service position?
Of these two resumes who would you call for an interview? Just
like Fran, many people aren't good candidates for chronological
resumes because their job titles don't match the jobs they want.
Be sure your
resume sells you effectively - whether it's a skill based resume
or a chronological resume. |
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How Do
Fran's Job Titles
Affect Her Image? |
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Graphing Fran's
job titles compared to her skill headings makes it very clear
why most resumes don't work.
Fran wants a position at $33,000+ as a Customer Service Representative,
which I've placed at the top of this graph. Now,
let's graph Fran's first job title of Directory Operator.
Is this title
at the level of a $33,000 Customer Service Representative position?
Most people graph it below Fran's goal.
Fran's 2nd and
3rd job titles were telemarketer. Does this make Fran's image
go up or down? Most people graph Telemarketer way below Directory
Operator.
What happens
with the next title of Assembly Worker? Does Fran's image go
up or down. Most people say way down.
How about her
next title of Owner? Up or down? Most people say up slightly
- but they don't know how Owner relates to customer service. Then
we see Fran's last two job titles of Operator. Most people say
these titles bring her image back down. As you can see, Fran's
job titles present her at a level far beneath her goal. |
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Now Let's
Look At Fran's Skill Headings |
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Fran used Customer
Service Representative and Marketing & Administrative Management as headings in her after resume. Now
let's graph them. Does the first heading of Customer Service
Representative match Fran's goal of a Customer Service Representative
at $33,000? Does her image go up, down or stay on the same level
as her goal when you read the heading of Customer Service Representative?
Most people graph it even to Fran's goal.
Does the
second heading of Marketing & Administrative Management match
Fran's goal? Does her image go up, down or stay the same? Again,
most people graph it even to Fran's goal.
Be sure to
graph your resume in order to understand and control your image! |
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